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Ryosuke - Pandect WIP

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Yes, this is a WIP. It will be moved to scraps in due time. Was just hoping maybe I could get some comments/suggestions/critiques out of this. Thanks. ^^;
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Ahem. Okay.

On your comment about the head, yeah, it looks a bit funny; it looks like you started with a simple headshot, liked what you had, and pressed yourself to add the body afterward. Actually, a lot of the body parts seem to be in full working order, just slightly larger or smaller than need be, kinda like you took the drawing one piece at a time. I'd tell you to try to make the hand bigger, the head smaller, and maybe elongate the torso (just a bit).. That is, if you'd listen. xP

Maybe it's just perspective or something, but his facial features look like they're shifted a bit 'up' on his head. I guess the only reason I spotted this is because I do it all the freakin' time -- thank god for Free Transform, right? <3

I make mistakes like this all the time, and I'm -in- practice (or something like it). They're silly, I tell you. Silly silly mistakes!

In conclusion, the 'distant relative' is so cute it makes my soul giggle.

Love ya, dear ~ <3 Christopher

P.S. You two kids play nice, or I'll get the flyswatter! >C